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My loon is too bouyant in this painting so I will go back and try to fix that problem. The smoke and fire looks a little bazaar; I will also be going back to this and try to make it more realistic. What I might also consider is working a nest and marsh plants around the loon so I can make it appear to be nesting. I should also look at fixing the trees and the point located at on the left side of the painting. I don't really know what to do with the boat and fishermen yet; I know the boat doesn't look proportional to the picture.
